AlfredSymon

A great poem to start the day. Morning seems afternoon-ish for me. Anyway's, kudos to your poem. I really like the style of how you wrote it. The unpredictable rhymes, ...

Hi sarebear! So about this story, I think it's actually nice. The plot, although simple, made my head turn and think about it. I reckon you based it on finding ...

I really love your intention to write a poem to a friend... I also liked your idea of happiness... The poem made me realize many things. I don't care about ...

Yippee! I think that it was really funny. Although, it has a lot of grammatical mistakes and the word choice is a bit rusty. If you can, edit it more ...

Wow! Kudos to you! I believe that you made such an art just by taking pictures of places that you will go to or places you went to. You are ...

Wowee! Kudos to you. I'm very happy that someone made a poem that made me keep reading in a very fast pace. The first was Fairy Reel by Neil Gaiman. ...

Kudos to you. The one word title was very emotional and I like it, it conveys so much of your entry. The only, and very small, part I seemed to ...

Kudos to you. So this is your excuse when you arrive late, huh. How about writing some more? When I first read your poem, I thought of it as "Another ...

I HATE YOU!!!!!! Because you made me laugh in public!!!!! I was very embarrassed because your poem is too funny!!! Why do you have to be funny?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Why do you ...

Ok... So Spongebob.... I LOVE Spongebob... and their songs! Then combine the song... with another favorite... YWS! Pure Genius!

Wow! What an inspirational poem. Your description of "nonsense" makes it very interesting to check out, making me check it out. So when I read it, I opened a door ...

The Concept of Fears By: Alfred Symon What do I fear? I fear antelopes, Flint roads, Three-bean soups, Wild Tarantulas, Gorgonzola Cheese, Monosodium Chloride, Seafood Enchilada, Paper dolls singing S

Kudos to ya. I really like the poem. It's some kind of a vow, or promise. The contents of your poem emanates a great desire to plead for someone's promise, ...

Some of the World’s Immortal People Are Alive, Some are Dead A Tanka* Collection By: Alfred Symon Helen Keller To my pen idol Whose ears hear the truth and eyes ...

Hiyah! Great work! Kudos to your repetition technique, especially the middle where the first line changed. I really felt your emotion in the beginning. And I really like the fifth ...