AlfredSymon

Hiya! Your poem is great, that's why I'm here! So that's all. I liked how your words exemplified things so colorfully and imaginatively, but still staying in the emotional, frozen ...

What a nice song to read aloud in the morning, mist. (Pun not intended :) ) I like how you put coldness and frailty into the verses without taking out ...

Wowiie! It's so angelic and serene. First and foremost, I am awed for your technique of combining images because it looked as if the three images were originally one. Secondly, ...

Hiyah! I love seeing men and bears! Your works look pretty good if yo ask me. I like the way the images were shaded and outlined. The bear is quite ...

Good day, Ms. Amy, About your script. I've read a few scripts now, but I think this is one of the best. Why? It's because of its easy relevance to ...

Her She is gone. She's not here, anymore. And now, I see all the love letters I wrote for her, but never tried to give her. Why? Why didn't I? ...

Hiyah! Your post, the Passenger Seat, is a very good of example of poems that leaves its readers shock, then delivers a finishing blow that makes the reader feel disturbed ...

So, did you really pull the trigger? Kidding! :) I like how depressing your poem is. Simply reading it made me feel sad, it made me give in. You made ...

Hello, Story Weaver. Did you know that I'm called Dream Weaver? Just want to say how are monikers are quite related. Anyways, I really like your poem! As in really. ...

Wow, Mr. Full, I think you did a very good job. Kudos to you. I really liked the new things that you added. And, in my opinion, it really fits ...

A Night in My Town Tired from work, I walk home Step, step, step. My feet go Home, there I will head Step, step, step. My feet go Into the ...

News Flash! Everyone, Read! One sun-shiny day, right now to be exact, You read this poem. But as you read it, Creaks and crackles And screams started clamoring outside, So ...

Good day, Mr. Fullmetal. I wonder if you are really made up of metal. Getting back, I like your poem. But that doesn't mean I didn't see any flaw. First, ...

Hello there, Misty, so, um about your poem, "Life", well first, I liked it, but sooner or later, I found out things that I didn't like much. Somewhere to be ...

Hiya! I really like your work because of the nostalgia it brings to me... I clearly imagined your poem's essence as I've read it because I remember this same thing ...