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Re: The Lunatic
Instead of putting puns and smile-o-meters, I'll be serious this time (not exactly ;) ) I understand the feeling when you feel like you don't belong, you're an alien . ...
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Re: Broken
Hi Shadow Lily! I believe Broken is as dark as your name! About Broken, I admire how you easily incorporated a song lyric with a title. It was...(emotional drum roll)...perfect ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: The Devil's Game
:smt077 Prelude (Taken from the Book of Ages: Necronomicon) Ne'er play the Devil's game for all choice, you end the same Only oneth way to go: to die And so ...
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Re: Finding yourself
Hey! What's with cats these days? I'm a fish person. Your poem, The One, is a very good read! Love, fear, freedom, escape; an all-in-one read huh! Here's a breakdown ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: The Casualties of War
To Vietnam, Mr. Shade! To Vietnam... Hi this is Al. So I've read your work, and I found two things: A set of facts about Vietnam War and a new ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Halloween
Hiya! Let me say this first, I think your problem is your age. I think you can sleep sounder when you're younger. Have you tried the Fountain of Youth or ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: At your service
Hi, I'm here at your service! I'm not the very best artist around, but I love seeing and critiquing artworks (this may mean I love museums). So bare in mind ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Symptoms of Bullies' Croup
Thanks for the comment! I think you're right about the last part! About the first part of your comment, I think you got it a bit wrong. The speaker, me,is ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Symptoms of Bullies' Croup
Hi guys! Doctor Alfred Symon here! So many have misinterpreted this poem so its a must to read this first! The poem is about a guy who went to me, ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Night Life
Good day Soccerstar! Well, well, well; we have an athlete here. I hate you, you know why? Because you made my favorite character become the killer! O come one! Anyways, ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Watching Me
Hiya! This is Al back for a review, so please don't swallow me! About the story, I really look up to you, right now, at this moment because of the ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Limerick 1
*giggle* About your poem *giggle* Limerick 1, well it's so darn funny! It's so hard to comment on short works like this one, the reason for this is that there ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Three Word Story
I will walk
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Gravedigger
Hooray! It's time for a celebration! Bring out the confetti! No pun intended... The reason for this is that I simply love your story! The history, the plot, the coldness, ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Ugly Rainbows
Hi, it's Al again, making a review! :) I love the idea of rainbows. So I was immediately intrigued when you titled it 'ugly' And then I found out that ...
Dec 14, 2011
