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Re: Aley's Amazing Atrocities
You are the drifting dreams on dreary summer days down to below freezing as the sun dances away hides behind the hideous clouds and hoards it's warmth. You are my ...
Apr 22, 2018 -
Re: Aley's Amazing Atrocities
I hiccup like an elephant is trying to ram it's way out of my throat bashing into the one way door and falling down with a yelp each time again ...
Apr 21, 2018 -
Re: Aley's Amazing Atrocities
Lead me gently by the hand your fingers grazing mine as we walk among this fire land enclosed in my hidden shrine Our minds are gently swaddled together like twined ...
Apr 20, 2018 -
Re: Aley's Amazing Atrocities
I saw this cherub dancing around the school like a soft feather floating on the wind, drifting aimlessly through the halls until a loud obnoxious puppy came and decided he ...
Apr 19, 2018 -
Re: Aley's Amazing Atrocities
I used to think ... this was all nonsense that poetry was just a formula you mash together in order to get a great result that anyone could do it ...
Apr 18, 2018 -
Re: Aley's Amazing Atrocities
And poetry is a formula What is the subject, what does the total equal What are the parts, the x, the y, the z, Focus on your fractons, your syllables, ...
Apr 18, 2018 -
Re: Aley's Amazing Atrocities
The darkness whines at me like a broken vacuum seal slowly losing it's perfection. His cold wet nose bumps my cheek. - 9
Apr 17, 2018 -
Re: love on the water, love underwater, love, love and so on.
NaPo is for challenges!
Apr 16, 2018 -
Re: Aley's Amazing Atrocities
Tell me finally you'll fall from my ears drift into oblivion so peaceful and silent like hiding beneath the waves farther down than your heart can travel and resting there, ...
Apr 16, 2018 -
Re: Aley's Amazing Atrocities
Freedome hard won hard lost and hard fought We scrapped like rats over a piece of cheese begging for it to be clean paws swiping, claws digging and teeth noshing ...
Apr 15, 2018 -
Re: April Madness 2018
Oh my god congratulations @TheSilverFox!@@
Apr 15, 2018 -
Re: Aley's Amazing Atrocities
I lay dying in the dust your feet crush me flatter and churn me into the carpet until I am nothing but pulp. Is this cleaning?
Apr 14, 2018 -
Re: 30 Reasons Why Love Hurts
do you want me to move this to the actual NaPo thread area rather than the archives where we house all the stuff from last year?
Apr 13, 2018 -
Re: Aley's Amazing Atrocities
It was ten years ago today, and I know that you would want me to be happy, to continue the tradition but all these years, I just couldn't do it. ...
Apr 13, 2018 -
Re: Sinking in an hourglass
I like your poems better the less they rhyme, but i think you have a great way of picking out symbols and topics.
Apr 12, 2018
