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Broken Memories of Happy Times You are the rickety walls and old paint that peels with a little dampness, rain the old steps untrodden, weedy and foggy windows, drafty. You ...

I like the feel of April fifth, pecking birds, it reminds me of a pantoum. You have that sort of repetition that hits like refrains when you repeat words. I ...

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The Day Will Come When You Don't Know Me You were my ever, my bolder, support, a brick wall to lean. Then ants crawled in you, wiggled through your skull ...

You Were Mine In private, I tooled away at your edges trimmed you, molded you, added clay to your nose and reworked you I smashed you into pieces, reglued you ...

Morose 5 Lines Deceased end of being collapsing endless sleep loss eclipsed with empty returns Ended Cinquain

Yes, I was playing with a ballad style. I didn't stick to like an abab structure, but I did do the alternating iambic tetrameter and trimeter stanzas. I just ended ...

I love the content of this first poem. I can completely understand that feeling, and that situation. You've hit the nail on the head with how it feels to try ...

I can really see the emotion in this second poem [an icebox of toys ...] so while I didn't enjoy the emotions, I like the poem. The most visceral part ...

I love the sentiment of your poem Inosculation! I like that you had the definition in the poem too, or as a pre-note really because it added a lot to ...

My Throat is an Example of Igneous Rock It claws at my throat like a porcupine sleeping it's spines aimed to stab me every time I swallow. I dread the ...

RAINDROPS R apping on my roof drips A nd drops little lifegiving grains I nto the soil below. I love it N ow, after learning all it D oes for ...

The Silver Beast Have you heard of the silver beast haunting all the shadows? He wanders the hills of the east. To him adventure goes. Tell me, have you heard ...

Hey everyone, I wanted to break the ice and get some discussion rolling. One of the things we'll be doing in this thread is posting things that can help you ...

RAINDROPS R apping on my roof drips A nd drops little lifegiving grains I nto the soil below. I love it N ow, after learning all it D oes for ...