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Re: Into the Stars
Scar Jam 4/16 Class of Nurses I sit here among you, watching languidly my ears half-tuned to the lecture, observing with the other half. You all are trembling rocking tables, ...
Apr 17, 2017 -
Re: Into the Stars
Scar Jam 4/16 Dear Summer, I Expel Thee my breath, the last e-scaped me ye-ster-day I fell u-pon my bold u-gly blan-ket and heaved for it, but it re-fused my ...
Apr 17, 2017 -
Re: Buying: 1 art commission for 400 points
What type of pirate ship are you looking for? Can you find an image that gives a reference for what sort of ship detail you want?
Apr 17, 2017 -
Re: the entire history of human desire takes 70 minutes to tell
I love how much of a narrative this last one was, poem 13. As a reader I really got into the story and I could tell a lot about the ...
Apr 16, 2017 -
Re: evanescence
In evanescence xv , this last one, I really like how you handle the turn. You work towards this climax of "these are beautiful things and so are you" but ...
Apr 16, 2017 -
Re: Contests Thread
My contests I want to Accomplish Poem a Day - doneish 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 11. 12. 13. 14. 15. 16. 17. 18. 19. ...
Apr 16, 2017 -
Re: Into the Stars
A Poet's Universe 1 2008 Before I graduate senior year Mother's surgery planned Cleaning out her c-section four rare bacteria Leo? No, earlier maybe 2006 but he's 9 or 10 ...
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Re: April Madness 2017
... Ever After" I swallow, choke, on candy drops the praise of Pops rejects my blood and torments flood. My brain consumes the flowers whole a vomit bowl the end, ...
Apr 16, 2017 -
Re: Into the Stars
The Limit of My Patience is Quickly Waining Stomach knots tight, legs quake, eating crows would be more pleasant than living with this acid heart disease. You stress me as ...
Apr 16, 2017 -
Re: Into the Stars
... Ever After" I swallow, choke, on candy drops the praise of Pops rejects my blood and torments flood. My brain consumes the flowers whole a vomit bowl the end, ...
Apr 15, 2017 -
Re: Into the Stars
When Out Hiking Night fire glow warm cuddle prickly beard, fur camp Lanturne
Apr 15, 2017 -
Re: Into the Stars
We are drifting on the tongue of a whale the size of our universe swirling and bobbing in his saliva. Our lives just bubbles quick to pop, and fluffed away ...
Apr 14, 2017 -
Re: Into the Stars
Poem of the day The looming death is like a water-fart refuses to vacate the premises permeates the air, digs into nostril hair looses the heavy cloud of foreboding that ...
Apr 13, 2017 -
Re: Into the Stars
The Siren's Call Tell me you feel the gentle breeze whisking into your sails. They ruffle your hair, and roll by as the deck heaves. You can't blame them for ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: Into the Stars
In the Witness of a Farmer's Hunt, a Huntsman Discovers Humanity Sweet blaze, clean ash sign Nice sun, dry coal line Harsh ice, wet log rot Stick cuts, lost my ...
Apr 11, 2017
