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XD Love the rhyme in this. Considering you've got so much said in such a small space I could really see what you could do with a longer piece. Keep ...

I think the Cantaloupe poems are interesting, but the second one feels a little disjointed. I love how visceral and exact they are about what you want them to say. ...

That last poem you have on here, number 6. Plant Life, I really like it. I think you've got a good handle on the description side of things and I ...

I really like poem 4. You have a great way of storytelling in that, and it really makes me want to keep reading the story, but at the same time, ...

Yikes, that last one is really dark. I think what I like the most about it is that you seem to be very sure of yourself and your writing. You're ...

Yes, as long as the majority are done 12 hrs apart then you can use them

Universe Challenge 6 an interviewee I enter your domain a beast A nobody you dislike for disliking's sake and you smile at me. I am the fish spied behind the ...

There is one more full day of NaPo left! Today is the day to catch up if you've fallen behind your daily goals for poems, and one of the last ...

Horse Shoe Farrier Shod, rasps, nippers, sole, frog, gait, traction, cold shoe, hot shoe, lameness, distortion, shoe puller, bob punch, pritchel, rasp handle, I am at peace with my anvil ...

Because I never Learned the Names of Books They are the gutter of my smooth thud paperback on a plate. Devour the spine of a torsugine as some mystery sheer ...

I swear my sword to the After Watch!

Poet's Universe Challenge 3 Merlin sums it up best. Free Will and Fate work together to create. Neither Nature nor Change are supreme. Both working together May Nature embrace us ...

Scarless Skin is in Labs Human's first love is skin, The thickest thing so thin. The bloody sheen's a suitor; But nothing such a pewter. Then sheen recedes to sheen. ...

My focus wains like the moon as we wage war between the sea and the rays drifting down ghost feathers tickling hair Don't leave me I feel your skin slick ...

Well I think what you're seeing in the article is actually just the difference between how poetry handles meter and stress, and how novels/short stories handle meter and stress. I ...