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Aley

  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: April Madness 2019

    The trees whisper ____ go home, go home __ stranger among us as I walk along their midnight path flashlight wash along the stones they crackle as I step __ ...

    Apr 9, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: call the angels; this means war

    I really want more backstory to your fourth poem. I like it, and it has me curious but it doesn't feel long enough

    Apr 7, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: NaPo 2019? Omg It's 2019.

    "You never know what you have until it was" and I miss you, your encouragement the listening, the stories, trips up the twists dancing car lights through the tunnel off ...

    Apr 7, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: NaPo 2019? Omg It's 2019.

    The trees whisper ____ go home, go home __ stranger among us as I walk along their midnight path flashlight wash along the stones they crackle as I step __ ...

    Apr 6, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: call the angels; this means war

    I think this poem is really cute and I love "second-hand cold" because there are so many interpretations of that. Either the speaker is sick, they are feeling cold, or ...

    Apr 5, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: NaPo 2019? Omg It's 2019.

    scraped feet on success bleed wine against souls crass bailiff screams, crack vertebrae for coin take out the man trash Fire Drills failed, real fire for-got, safety meeting revelations don't ...

    Apr 5, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: NaPo 2019? Omg It's 2019.

    I grouse among the high nosebleeds clawing closer, diving from trees the landing ease of a rock burying itself in a wake shattering outward and a flake, cold will break ...

    Apr 4, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: NaPo 2019? Omg It's 2019.

    Thanks guys, yes @alliyah, you are right, I am doing structures alphabetically per day. To my ultimate horror though, Shadow Poetry seems to have lost all funding and been taken ...

    Apr 4, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: call the angels; this means war

    Yes Please! This is great HolySocks! Lots of emotion, specific enough to feel very much like an individual rather than a collective, good use of grammar and everything. I love ...

    Apr 4, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: call the angels; this means war

    @Holysocks, what's your next poem idea? [I'm just getting you to your thread quickly through notifications so you post a poem XD]

    Apr 3, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: NaPo 2019? Omg It's 2019.

    Aley curious _____ private _____ messy _____ isolated Sister of ______ The Master of Her Domain, __ Hugo Wrangler, __ Hard Worker, __ Determinedly Lover of ______ Shuichi and his ...

    Apr 3, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: call the angels; this means war

    Hey Holy, I really want to see more specifics in your poem today. Get down to names and specific events and ideas rather than abstract. Right now this poem could ...

    Apr 2, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: NaPo 2019? Omg It's 2019.

    Most of my classmates live on their own Yearning for freedom from their parents They wouldn't revel my position Even those who used to be my friends Not for sickness, ...

    Apr 2, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: April Madness 2019

    I also want to participate

    Apr 1, 2019
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: NaPo 2019? Omg It's 2019.

    Yo, I have a few hours before April begins.

    Apr 1, 2019


while she was studying the ways of pasta he was studying the ways of the sword
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