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This poem does do good as a poem really capturing the action in the battle, but not as much as the emotions with how broken up the lines are. I ...

Those Left Behind In memory, we say, You were the best. Hold your head up high and move on. The world around you moves without you. The stars still glimmer ...

I feel like the poem was a little broken up with the punctuation. If you go through and read it again I think you'll get the rhythm down better than ...

Hi, so to break up all of the Hi I'm new here, I'll tell you all why I'm here in the subject. I love poetry, and writing in general. I've ...