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I'll do my best to be there, but the timing might make it hard. Insensitivity

I came back last night and lurked, but now I am going to say I'm officially back, not that you knew me to begin with o.o. I only stuck around ...

As a poem it is somewhat easy to tell that you're new to this but that only leads to improvement in the end. We wrote these types of poems back ...

I also got the very Victorian Shakespeare feel from this poem which I think really says quite a bit about your character. All the same I shall refrain from such ...

This seems somewhat disconnected to me because the first stanza doesn't quite follow the last in syllables. The first stanza ends quite solidly with golf because of the nice cut ...

I find that the beat is broken up with the arise rather than emphasized with it because you have the same lines over and over with a few changes. Generally ...

The world will spin around us, As we stand here in place. Or are we the ones spinning In and out of grace? Those who watch us stare, And those ...

Thank you all for reviewing and if you read this I'd like to explain a little to hopefully see if it came across as I intended. Jas- I agree, the ...

I feel like you knew what you wanted to talk about in the poem, but your determination to keep with the rhyme scheme hindered what you wanted to say. From ...

This poem has a lot of good imagery but you should watch out for using the same object for two different things. To describe a day, you used a windy ...

The poem didn't really attract me until you reached more of a loose style actually saying something rather than describing things. I feel like the repetitiveness of the word Rain ...

I enjoyed this poem because it not only explained the infatuation in a way that made it seem reasonable, but it also was a last stand at the end rather ...

We hold onto ourselves. We don't let go We won't let go of what we know. Gathering our hearts, Our souls, and lives, We can't let go. The world may ...

Thank you all for your feedback. Comment about Frost: He is mainly overrated but he does have some strong poems and good points at times. I do not like all ...

I feel like you wrote the poem mainly out of spite for something that happened, but at the same time it confused me. The physical does not exactly match up ...