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Re: Mist (redone)
Hi, Congratulations! I think it's better than the old one. Looking forward to reading more from you! Smiles, Alexxa
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Re: My so called normal life
Hi there! I dearly hope you had formatted this a lot better to make it easily readable. I suggest you repost it and then I'll read it again and give ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Fire-bird chapters prologue and chapter 1
Hi! Too short! Anyway, please allow me to give a few points. He pulled his hand from the threadbare curtain and let it fall “good bye Fire bird” he whispered ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Six Years
Hi, I'll be happy to give my insights. First point, I love sad stories, especially tragic ones. Secondly, I agree with the first reviewer that the character shouldn't be perfect. ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Till Death Do Us Apart-(Prologue)
Hi there! What can I say? It's more than wonderful! Like most of the reviewers, I loved the opening paragraph! The way you combined those words together and came up ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: School Romance?
Wow. So I see, you're sixteen and in love. That's nice. Through the simple yet meaningful words you used, I can easily tell your emotions. I'm not really very good ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Not Your Ordinary Girl
Forrest of Oaks Chapter 1: Forrest Bellaflor Forbes Park was well known for housing the wealthiest families and most prominent expatriates in the Philippines. A gated community, Forbes Park was ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hi! Glad to be here :) I'll review as much as I can, I promise! :) Smiles, Alexxa
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: A Taint Of Red (First Draft)
Hi there! I'll be happy to review this as well. :) Smiles, Alexxa
Oct 21, 2010
