Alexxa

Heartfelt yet engaging. I'm working on the same idea so I was able to relate tremendously. Good job. Keep it up!

Hi! You're only thirteen but I can sense too much passion already. Dreams are there to dream no matter how long or how tough they seem to achieve. This has ...

Thanks a lot, Pink! Your comments are dearly appreciated. I hope to hear more from you on my next chapters!

Purple is my favorite color, too! Surely, this means so much to you (the writer), and so allow me to congratulate you. Every literary work is a masterpiece for the ...

Hi guys! Reviews are helpful! Open to good or bad, as long as you say something! Waiting... :)

Hi there! I love anything about love. If this had been a short story, it could have been a hit! I mean, immortal love has always been what young people ...

Hi there, Wicked! I really like this is a very good start. I never listen when my mom yells at me. Her eyes are bloodshot , her thin brown hair ...

Hi! I think this is actually the first 2nd person story I've read. And I don't see why I shouldn't like it. It has mystery to the person narrating. How ...

Hey! I had so much fun with it. although, I wished there was more. Part 2 anywhere? Oh, it's a short story! Sorry, for that! Anyway, I loved the gentle ...

Hi! I definitely agree with the others that your writing is fabulous! In this genre, only proper descriptive words can make it more appealing-which you did! So, Congratulations! It is ...

Forrest of Oaks Chapter 2: Miguel Lopez The Bellaflor mansion had nine baths, seven bedrooms, four dens, two offices, and two kitchens. Outside were two big pools, two Jacuzzis, a ...

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Hi! I'm so excited to review this one today! You were just a little nobody in the school, (after the comma should be a space. Same goes with periods.) you ...

Hi! Glad to have found this one! I really enjoyed it! The story is very interesting and would be most likely read by male teens. The dialogues are lively and ...

Hello there! I just want to apologize for focusing on the negative side. Allow me to say that I think this one is going to be promising. So, I'll look ...