AlextotheAndra

I agree with the review above, there is certainly something with this idea, but i think its a little too much. I dont get why she would pick this lyndon ...

I thought that this was very interesting. I didn't completly understand what it was you were writting about, a phycological battle or a sort of dilusion, or even just ineternal ...

This reminded me a lot of myself! haha, not in the beautiful or graceful way, more just of the view of the world. The peace when you are outside and ...

I think this is a very intersting peice. You used a great vocabulary, but i thought at points it drowned out the message of the poem. This line inparticular "Its ...

I thought this was a really cute little story. I giggled at the end when she fell, and i definatly wish something like this would happen to me. Your characters ...

Thank you soo much! It's so sweet of you and everyone has been so lovley. Ok questions; Dessert- apple and berry pie OR pavlova Colour- I would have to say ...

I realised that although i wrote in here before i didnt give any proper information about myself well here it goes... My name is alex (alexandra really but i dont ...

Hello there, i am new as well, and im fifteen as well and just to freak you out im a christian as well! :) hehe no, really im just another ...

Hello there, i am alex :) im new as well- nice to meet you :)

I really thought that this was an interseting poem, and it was clear from the begining what you were talking about. I liked all the short descriptive linnes of key ...

I think this is an amazingly emotive piece of writing, i remeber similar feelings from when i saw the footage of the towers. I dont really have constructive points, but ...

This peom is short but it captures the mood of the piece well for three stanzas. I like the confliction between the "Real you" and what you have been taught- ...

sorry I am leaving the site due to study issues ( aka no time to write) and I dont want to leave work up unfinished :)

Hello, I'm alex and I am new. I hope to post some things soon and meet other writers, Im a softmore ( I think, I'm Australian) anyway it is nice ...

Hello- I thought this was a good prologue. It made a little of a slow start but i understood that you were setting up the seen, and i thought your ...