AlextotheAndra

Windermere was one of the tiniest of towns, really more of a village. From the boundary limits, with a small hand painted sign nearly engulfed by the evergreen shrubbery to ...

Hello there, I would love another opinion on my short story. It is sort of experimental, but it is really just about a spider

Chapter 4 Even on the best of days, Ms Carol had a way of dragging everyone she came within ten meters of down. The as she walked into the classroom, ...

Hello there, My first foray into short story writing- the web- is currently on zero reviews... I would love to know how it is to read and wether it is ...

The web- A short story It was on days such as these that I dwelled on the fact that I knew little more of life than to kill, feast, breed ...

I am super sorry about the spelling, on an iPod :)

Good evening, Generally I don't like reading any fantasy romance these days, after all of the twilight hype has sort of ruined the genre, for me anyway. I though it ...

So I have decided to do NANOWRIMO for the first time ever this year. I would locve it if those of you who have or are participating would tell me ...

This poem read excellently, i have a cuple of tiny things, ut thier more of a personal feel than an actual issue with the writning. Well done, I wanted to ...

Hello! thank you for reviewing my story :) ton return the favour: I have not read the other chapters of this story, but i actually think that this chapter is ...

Chapter three First to reach the lab behind Mr Telling, Oscar opened the door and walked in calmly. Looking around the room and pretending that he hadn’t seen everything before, ...

sorry I am leaving the site due to study issues ( aka no time to write) and I dont want to leave work up unfinished :)

This is an extreamly intersting piece of poetry. The comparison between natural forces and a person/actions are excellent and give a really unique feel to this poem. I have never ...

I thought that this poem was really original and did mimic the movement of a swing, it gave you that steady feeling of motion . My only issure is just ...

I really loved this. i agree with the above comments about the repetition of you, but otherwise beautiful job! the emotion was really clear and the whole piece had that ...