AlexandraBurton

Oh, lovely. I am officially in love with this story. It's well written, and moves with a ease I haven't seen in other places. Since those grammar Nazis up there ...

“Kaito?” asked Abigail, from her perch up on the lamppost. I looked up, cricking my neck, and saw that she was stretching her wings. Did I forget to mention that? ...

Heyyy. So I liked this too. Yep, now the 'young master' does seem a lot like Artemis - a shyer, older Arty, but Arty all the same. This household deals ...

[worships it] I love it! I don't know why, exactly. maybe it's because the 'employer' reminds me so much of Artemis Fowl. I love Artemis Fowl. I don't have much ...

It's a lovely picture. Her hair looks lovely in the (titular) breeze, and the sky looks almost ethereal, with little strips of color running through it. The beach looks amazing, ...

I liked everything. Sorta. Except the title. It could probably use some more work. instead of fading it, couldn't you have done something else? It looks kinda cheesy. Sorry, but ...

This is really cute. :) I don't see what's so bad about the background. It kinda goes with her hair, being brown. And you seemed to have focused in on ...

You used MS Paint, eh? Crap program for art, honestly. But for a mouse drawing this is great. Other reviewers already mentioned the waist and the legs (and problems thereof), ...

Nice! The tiger's kinda awesome. The colors stand out vividly. I see you wrote something about Einstein next to it. :D The ink scribble - ha ha, even I do ...

I drew this in class, while the rest of my classmates were trying to rehearse for 'A Midsummer Night's Dream'. I know it's a bit plain and colorless, but that's ...

It's not bad, seeing that this is your first time. Faces aren't all lines. Observation is a key to learning. A little more detail could probably be used - especially ...

It's not a bad story, but I could see several errors... The whole screen went black, then an alarm went off and red letters appeared, "The Earth has tilted off ...

I'd say I enjoy sci-fi and action/adventure. Say Isaac Asimov. There isn't a single way you can go wrong with Asimov. Pity he's dead. He would've loved the twenty-first century. ...

For all those fatalists out there wondering what the end of the world will be like, here’s a hint: it’s boring. Dead boring. Out-of-my-mind-with-boredom boring. Yep, this is Kaito K, ...

I like this. It's emotional but not fluffy. You seem to have free-written at times, and that gives me the feel of a poetess who is trying to cope with ...