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Re: Trapped - Chapter One
Thanks for the tips! I found them really helpful. I've been needing an extra set of eyes to view my work and critique it. I knew my story wasn't quite ...
Mar 17, 2013 -
Re: Death Becomes Her
I really liked your poem! Going back to the "soaked with dust" metaphor, though, "soak" usually applies to water, so when you use that word in that way, it makes ...
Mar 16, 2013
