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Re: Faith in the Fayth
Alright. I have to say that is a very short story and not that long and i'm kinda saying what i'm seeing. You see, I think it should be longer, ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: The day my world collapsed
HMMM. What to say what to say....... I got it! Here's a list of thing's a like: 1. your description 2. your writing style 3. your story! I think it's ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Silent Chaos
Okay here is a review for you....I think that you should add some more description. More detail you know. And another thing, try adding some of your personality into the ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: The Spider Queen: Chapter One
Yeah. My friend wanted to write a story so I let her....She wants to continue but...I don't know. She doesn't even read so why does she like writing? She said ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: The Spider Queen: Chapter One
Chapter One: Taken By Storm A night as black as the Abyss itself. The moon, full, eyes wide open. It watched the world below as what looked like fog came ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Scarlet Raindrop
Just lovely!! Gorgeous!! I must say that You put images into my head. I could hear the characters voices, and see the light shining through the trees! You have a ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Venolf War - Chapters 1 - 6
very nice! I like the dramatic scene where they realize they had changed into a wolf.
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Edward and Bella
I'm not the biggest fan of twilight. I read each book and am going to see the movies. I am more of a stephen King and Peter Straub. I advise ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Nightmare On My Street 1 (Movie Night)
Yeah my computer is dumb. It doesn't let you fix anything really. So if I type to fast and mess up, I have to either start over, or leave it.
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Nightmare On My Street 1 (Movie Night)
It was a cold Novemeber evening in Massachusetts. Genni sat on her couch, the crunching sound of popcorn under her teeth. She was watching Freddy vs Jason. As she sat ...
Sep 6, 2009
