Alchemist

Hey the full chapter is out. I know it's longer than what you wanted to review at first, but at least give it a glance, it will be helpful!

Oh man, this was supposed to be a draft only, I felt like starting a chapter but wasn't even close to finishing it. But you gave me quite a few ...

Actually, this was meant to be a draft, and unpublished, I'm confused... this is barely a beggining of a chapter, but thanks for the reveiw so far! Can I ask ...

Hi, thanks for review and reading! :) Was I supposed to say 'in' sick air? Help! xD Yes, it is supposed to be men, I just make that typo all ...

I'm really glad you liked it! Since you are also a fantasy writer I will read your story too! And I'm looking forward to see if you will like the ...

Thanks for the review... but it was rather confusing, with ConfusedGlasses also postind comment two I see double? :D I really don't mind, but I need you to explain me ...

Good! It is sometimes really hard to judge by the one chapter, so I'm looking forward to the next one, you can also tell me when it's out. :)

Yeah, you are totally right about everything, the truth is, I didn't put too much effort in this story... especially the fact that I wanted to add much, much more ...

oh I know, just a bad habit xD

well you got to the point in the end, I have to learn to be patient XD

Glad you liked it!

Thanks, glad you liked it. And about your nitpick, here I have been sitting, watching how exactly did I spell everything wrong... I was like, "no, dude I spelled only ...

actually threre are three mosquitos im hunting, maybe you are on to something! XD

It seems like people don't understand my story. xD Maybe it is cultural differences, I don't know. Let me explain. This is a story about my friend, who literally tries ...

Hm, the point of that story is, he literally wants to burn me with the cigar, thats what it's all about. Not burn me to death! :)