Alainna

Hello Whitepoem and welcome to YWS!! If you ever need anything feel free to pm me. Alainna xx

Heya. *waves* Welcome to YWS! It's nice to see another English chick around here. If you ever need anything feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help ...

Esme!! *huggles back*

Hello and welcome to YWS! This is a great forum to learn and improve so you'll fit in fine. Pm me if you ever need anything. All the best, Alainna ...

Hola Rubric and welcome to YWS! It's great to get some enthusiastic new writers posting here on YWS. If you need anything at all feel free to pm me and ...

I prefer the tone of this second chapter, although it still feels rather restrained. (Seven years) Same as last time; this doesn't work. Try: Seven Years Old. Olivia took her ...

I've read My Sister's Keeper , but I was wondering if Mercy is any good. Worth reading? xx

Hi there Phoebe and welcome to YWS! You seem like an honest and strong willed person. Yes, I did read your blog entry and found it...spot on? You see, it's ...

It's been a great year. So much has happened to me in these past months that I have been on YWS and I can think of no better a community ...

Hey Penguin, we've talked before but I thought I'd drop by and see your post. :D Living with four sisters must be both hilarious and suicidal....I thought having two was ...

Hiya and welcome to YWS! We also have a sister site -the writers society - if you feel a bit out of place around here. I wouldn't worry though - ...

Hey Twistedclocks and welcome to YWS!! I hope you like it here and I look forward to seeing you post. If you ever need anything then feel free to pm ...

I liked your idea of the father leaving and the way that Rosa reacted. First off, general stuff: (Four years) This isn't really clear enough. Try taking out the brackets ...

*shakes off umbrella and then has attack of the shivers* I feel your pain....England is not just rainy but freezing too. So, Hola/Yassou Faerlan and a big welcome to YWS!! ...

Heya Moo and welcome to YWS! Argh, I neither have the patience nor determination for NaNoWriMo. Congrats on completing it! If you ever need anything then feel free to pm ...