Alainna

Welcome back! Whoa, that's one nice picture. :shock: Anyways, we have not met but you seem really cool. It's a shame that college stopped you from being active around here. ...

Hiya Kiki! Well, a very belated welcome. I also love cats - I have a very grumpy one called Gizmo. Yes, as in the gremlin. :roll: I'm sure I'll see ...

Hiya and welcome to YWS! So, what music are you into? Genre you write? Any other interesting facts you can tell us about yourself? If you ever need anything then ...

I really like the second and third ones. The blue of her eyes contrasts well with the black and white. Your photoshopping is good quality on the last picture and ...

I know nothing about art so I'll just stick to opinion. The second one is great. It looks very realistic and detailed. The first is good but the proportions are ...

Structure This piece seemed to lack much structure. It felt a bit all over the place. Your stanzas were very random and there was little punctuation. I suggest that you ...

Heya and welcome to YWS!! *hands out cookies* Jazz is cool. What musicians are you into? Well, good luck with your writing. Feel free to pm me if you ever ...

Hola Omar and welcome to YWS!! YWS is a great place for motivation. Just read loads of peoples work and you'll soon feel like you want to write again. If ...

Hello Kaden and welcome to YWS!! Philip Pullman is a great writer, one of my favourite books is by him. Have you ever read 'The Butterfly Tattoo'? Well, if you ...

Hola Mara and welcome to YWS!! *hands out muffins* Ah, you seem like the type that YWS like. Random is good. Well, if you ever need anything then feel free ...

Hello and welcome to YWS!! Even if it is a bit late.. :wink: If you do ever need/want anything then feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to ...

First off, this was a very enjoyable piece and if you ever post anymore than feel free to pm me for a crit. You started off excellently, but as the ...

A very short piece that I don't really know what to do with. Any suggestions would be great, I know it's not my best work. I don't know if it ...

I've had glasses since I was eight and I will probably never wear contacts. I have this irrational fear of things going in my eyes (eyelashes make me squirm...) and ...

*fans off the crowd of girls that has gathered around JF's avvie.* Hey JF and welcome to YWS! Feel free to pm me if you need anything at all. As ...