Alainna

- Show don't tell. - Let your characters live. - Be prepared to be told you're crap. - Give the reader someone or something to root for. xx

I never really thought of my story as a movie. Most of my characters are based on people I know or have developed intricately in my mind over a period ...

I think in some cases euthanasia is the kindest thing to do. Why should some people spend their whole lives hooked up to machines, not being able to do anything ...

I slept through it as well. Then again, I also slept through my fire alarm... No - one I know felt it so maybe it didn't affect us round here. ...

Hi Megan and re-welcome to YWS!! If you need anything at all then just pm me and I'll be happy to help you out. What was your last username? I ...

Hi Books and welcome to YWS!! If you ever need anything then feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you out as best as I can. ...

Hiya Nistha and welcome to YWS!! So, what do you write? Your favourite book? Favourite band? If you ever need anything then feel free to pm me and I'll be ...

This was good - especially if you wrote it five minutes before posting. Some of the words were very generic, even for a song. I liked the rhythm although I'm ...

This was very cute. I actually though the continuing rhyme worked. - Line three was a bit odd and I really think it makes very little sense. Consider something else? ...

This is a very good poem and really original - I loved the word itself. I didn't much love the repetition, you could really have done without it in stanza ...

I love his shows. He never ceases to amaze me with how he does things. I just recently watched an episode of Trick or Treat where he made a woman ...

Hi, welcome to YWS. The streets of Paris were terrible, the sand entered me in the eyes and I couldn’t see very much. This is awkward and doesn't really make ...

Wow. Today is exactly one year since I clicked on the 'register' button on YWS. Which also means it's one year for Sumi. Whoo to us!! Hasn't time flied? xxx

Hi Liz, Why don't you offer your services to the local paper? I'm sure they'd take you on as a work experience student - or just as a student to ...

Hi, I found this article on Wikipedia (a great research site by the way) about werecats. Here's the link: [url] And here's a link for Wererats: All that I can ...