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Re: Helloooo
Hi Cam and welcome to YWS!! Aw, I like animals too. I have a grumpy cat called Gizmo, you know, like the Gremlin? Anyways, do you have any pets? If ...
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: funny words
That word actually makes me feel sick, Adnamarine. It's one of the longest words in the English language. xxx
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: There's awards for this?
Proceedings of the Second International Workshop on Nude Mice. How very random......
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: And We All Go The Same Way Home
I'm in love with it too. When I first looked at it I was a little worried about the length - I hate reading long pieces off the computer. But ...
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Titlescorer
I've tried this before.. Lyla scored 35.9% xxx
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: One Year Anniversary!!
Hasn't time flied? xxx Flied, I dunno. Flown, maybe? ;) But yeah. Wew-HEW, us! Lol!! That's my English slang for you!! We say it like that round here, which is ...
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: I have a problem.
I'm like that as well.....I suppose we all are to an extent. Fall in love with your characters and you'll stick to it. If you make your characters a part ...
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Making Up Words
If you want her to be a walking dictionary then I advise against making the words up unless the story is not set in this world. It just confuses things ...
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Write what you know
I think the others have hit the nail on the head to be honest. With that expression it just means write what you have felt I believe, so it's more ...
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: The Rose Garden
This is very cute but too short to really call a poem. Why don't you try turning it into a haiku (especially seens as it's already about nature) or extending ...
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: Earthquake in England
I didn't feel a thing, and I'm pretty sure I was awake at the time. Probably too far west, even if they do say Wales felt it. They always like ...
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: Children's screams
As it stands this appears to be in the format of a poem of sorts. To me it's a piece of prose. - Maybe create a very short story out ...
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: Somethings are just not meant to be
Hi Max, I really liked this. I can see it being a song - would you perhaps consider re-vising it so it becomes a song? sometime you have to live ...
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: Song
Hi, the concept of this was really good - relate-able. Are friendship always came first We shared are secerts with each other 'Are' should be 'our' in both sentences.'Secerts' should ...
Feb 27, 2008 -
Re: Firestarter (President of British Operations) Moves On
Good luck with your studies, Jack. Thanks for all that you've contributed to the site. Bye!! Alainna xxx
Feb 27, 2008
