Alainna

I quite liked this. It captured the emotions very well. …I think I need you Perhaps change to 'I think I'm gonna need you too.' It flows better and completes ...

I liked this poem, although the subject has been done many times before. I think it could do with being a bit longer, as it is now it is too ...

I'm reading Wuthering Heights by Emily Bronte. So far, so good.

At the moment this is a bit of a free - for - all. Without any structure this piece looks like a paragraph of navel - gazing. - Try to ...

I enjoyed this despite not reading the introduction. I think you're writing shows a lot of potential and I would be happy to read more. Something was happening, I didn’t ...

I find it so much easier to write from a female perspective (although I find myself being careful not to do a Mary Sue...). I hardly really try to write ...

Yesterday it came out that Dirty Dancing and Ghost star Patrick Swayze has been diagnosed with Pancreatic Cancer. Link: This is so sad! He's only fifty-five and it is a ...

That poor kid must have had some serious nightmares that night. :shock: Although that is quite amusing.... xx

Congrats Razor!! xxx

Aspergers is a form of Autism. :D I really liked this book as well. I think the way it was written was such an insight into how an autistic mind ...

Eeek!! I always forget to rate the chapters of Lyla that have the 'f' word in them 'R'. I always automatically rate them PG-13. I shall be better from now ...

Hi and welcome to YWS, Olivia!! If you need anything at all then just pm me and I'll be happy to help you out as best as I can. All ...

Hi and welcome to YWS!! If you need anything then just let me know. Alainna xx

I think you did really well to get such clear photos at a concert, what with the lighting and being shoved from all angles. I liked them a lot, especially ...

This isn't a poem. It contains no structure, very little grammar and probably belongs in a blog rather than on here. Please remember to use: Capital letters. Correct spelling of ...