Alainna

Hiya and welcome to the one and only YWS!! *hands out muffins* If you ever need anything then feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you ...

This is very short and I think that with the idea that you've got you may be better off writing a prose piece for it instead. What I would suggest ...

Hi and welcome to YWS. We do ask that you critique two pieces before you post your own and keep to the 2:1 ratio. I liked the twist at the ...

I guess it's just a mixture of Method Acting, as said before, and imagination. A person has many sides to themselves but I don't think you necessarily have to be ...

This seems fairly stupid. I think that you should be considered as a person- not based on gender or ethnicity - when applying for colleges. There is also a thing ...

The last one is my favourite - purely for its simplicity. I like the flower ones too. In particular the first one; the colours work well. I'm not too keen ...

Hehe, very good. Quirky. xxx

Hi Mark. This was a beautiful piece; very poetic. I loved the last two lines. I also found very little at fault with this piece. and rewards those who dance ...

Hello Dotz (cute username by the way) and welcome to YWS!!! *hands out muffins* If you ever need anything then feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to ...

I have to agree with Krupp. This is a very interesting way of revealing characteristics. A sort of Jekyll and Hyde. I liked the narrative a lot. I think that ...

Hey Jess! I liked this and I liked how the story turned out to be about racism - on some level. I knew that it was hot but who knew ...

Hi and welcome to YWS! I enjoyed the style of your writing, the narrative was your strong point. Pierre twitched his long fingers, anxiously his eyes never leaving the bulging ...

Leona Lewis *gags* The Wombats did a MUCH better version of Bleeding Love here: Maybe it's because I just don't like pop? Alainna xxx

POD??? What happened to POD??? xxx

Can your topic be about absolutely anything? If you decide to do "Is reading a lost art?" send me a PM because I just did a nine-page research paper on ...