Alainna

Hi Phorcys. You have a very good piece of writing here. Your style and tone is wonderful and very fitting of the piece. As for your questions: 1) Sandly Limerick ...

Hey James. Ah, Linkin Park, good choice. Learning to play the piano is one of those things that I know I want to do but will never get round to. ...

Hey, this had some really good elements to it and I liked the idea behind it. I think you need some punctuation in there - at the moment the words ...

This has a lot of potential, but as it stands it's lacking emotion. You're halfway there - if you add to this piece and go into more detail then I ...

Hola Frost and welcome to YWS!! *prods welcome banner* *banner falls down* Any-who, if you ever need anything then feel free to pm me and I'll be more than happy ...

Hello Cat and welcome to YWS!! *hands out party poppers* If you ever need anything at all - a crit, a chat, etc - then please feel free to pm ...

Heya, I also come from the land of the tea. Where the Queen lives. I wished I lived in the countryside; despite the poo. A Doctor? I could never stand ...

I really liked the idea behind this but a few things let your poem down slightly. They are talking Not to me Doesn't run very smoothly and doesn't make sense. ...

Hi and welcome to YWS!!! If you ever need anything at all then feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you out as best as I ...

Hola and welcome to YWS!! *prods banner* *banner falls down* Ah, spelling can be very evil - don't worry about it. YWS is a big help. Any-who, if you ever ...

Hey and welcome to YWS!! *hands out muffins* If you ever need anything at all - a crit, a chat, a question - feel free to pm me and I'll ...

This was very intriguing and yes, I suppose I did like it. The blade pierced into my chest shedding a thousand crimson tear drops onto the ground. Strong start. I ...

Good heavens! That is horrible. I actually can't believe it! Why, just why? Why do it and why post it on Youtube? And how can you explain any of it ...

Hi there. Well, both versions were written beautifully - you have a good way of capturing the feel and emotions of the moment and transporting the reader there. I preferred ...

Excellent stuff! I was wondering when the next Squills would be.. Alainna xxx