Alainna

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this stands I don't think you can really call this a song. The first verse is a bit generic and repetitive and the rest is non-existent. If you want opinions ...

As OverEasy already pointed out - this is leaning heavily into the cliche bucket. I suggest you use less general and cliche terms such as 'iron embrace' and 'his teeth ...

The first and third ones are really good - I love the colours of the first one in particular. I like the way you capture the moment in the last ...

Gorillaz, Foo Fighters, Chili Peppers - good taste. Hey Medusa and welcome to YWS!! If you ever need anything at all then feel free to pm me and I'll be ...

Oooh, very good. I only have a few things to say this time. 1) I didn't like the fact that you used a lot of brackets in this chapter. It ...

Hello and welcome to YWS. First off, should this be in Romantic Fiction? I may be presuming that this will turn into a romance, but otherwise it's fine where you ...

This is an interesting experiment and I'm intrigued as to how the song will affect the style of your writing. Although short, as you said, this was good. I liked ...

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Hola Anreya and a big welcome to the one and only YWS!! *hands out cookies* If you ever need anything I'm always happy to help. Just send me a pm ...

Oh, I love them! They're like pumpkins but on Coke cans. Excellent! Alainna xxx

I prefer the first two photos to the last one. I like the colours of the second one a lot - it also has a beautiful shot of the background. ...