Alainna

Hi there Christy and welcome to YWS!!! *hands out muffins* If you ever need anything at all then feel free to pm me and I'll be more than happy to ...

Hey there Drowsy Kaye (cool username by the way) and welcome to YWS!!! *prods welcome banner* *banner proceeds to fall down* Ah... Anyways, if you ever need anything at all ...

Hola Zoe and a big welcome to YWS!! *hands out cookies* If you ever need anything at all then feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help ...

Hey, welcome back!!! Good luck with your writing and stuff and if you need me you know where I am. See you around, Alainna xxx

Hey Mark, a good start. It is borderline cliche and I think that your overall tone of the piece and the way in which the characters talk is what makes ...

All done, honey. Wow, that crit was my first blue star. Yay. Keep them coming guys! Alainna xxx

Hey there JFW! I agree that your title is a bit...lacking. It's not easy to get a title that works well straight away and stick to it, especially when you ...

Hola and welcome to YWS!! *hands out greeting cards* If you ever need anything at all then feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you out ...

Hola and welcome to YWS!! *hands out party poppers* If you ever need anything then feel free to send me a pm and I'll be more than happy to help ...

Hello there and welcome to the one and only YWS!!! *prods welcome banner* *banner falls down* Anyways, if you ever need anything at all then feel free to pm me ...

Hey there. This had a lot of good elements to it and you write very competently, with a good strong narrative. I would be named something nice and pretty, like ...

Hey Heather. I really enjoyed this and can see it working well as part of a musical. In fact, I can hear the tune in my head as I read ...

Hey JC. This was another good installment, I'm starting to get into it even more. I think I actually preferred this part to the first - Anica's emotion were raw ...

Done! Any more? xx

Welcome back! I don't believe that we have previously met. *shakes hand* If you need anything at all, crit etc, I'm always happy to help you out. All the best ...