Alainna

Hi there! First off, there is potential in your writing and you do have the beginnings of a fantasy novel here. Good start! And the powerful, delightful group who all ...

I agree with the others when they say that it may be a good idea to lower the zoom used in #1. #3 and the last one were my favourites ...

Yay for YWS!! The only thing that is weird right now is the spell check. It's just showing the front page of YWS rather than checking the spelling of my ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS!! *hands out cookies* If you ever need anything at all then feel free to pm me and I'll be more than happy to help ...

Hola Anna and a big welcome to the one and only YWS!! *hands out muffins* If you ever need anything - a crit, a chat or a question etc - ...

Aw, this is highly cute. The lighting is very relaxing and it makes Oreo look god-like. I know you said you don't edit but I think the photo might be ...

Wow. I was mesmorised by that! I don't believe that there are any rules against posting that type of thing here. Very nice - is there a way of making ...

Hey Camille, I made it after all!! First off, I really enjoyed this and I would very much like to be on the List. I liked the way you described ...

Hey guys! Choco - a lovely ending dear! Aestar - I did it! Wolf - [s]I shall do it tomorrow as I've run out of time. I hope that's OK.[/s] ...

Hey there! Jasleen yelled as she pushed to wake up a tired Ariana Ariana says as she checks the clock You switch tenses here, from past to present. As the ...

Aw, a very cute ending. Summed it up nicely. “What about then Rosa got married? What about the day you left us?” 'then' should be 'when'. Also, this is a ...

Hola and welcome to YWS!! *hands out muffins* If you ever need anything at all then feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you out as ...

Heya Summerless and welcome to YWS!! *hands out cookies* If you ever need anything at all then feel free to pm me and I'll be more than happy to help ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS. We have a rule here that you have to critique at least two works before you post your own. I also suggest that you ...

Hi there! This was an interesting start and no, you didn't bore me to death. I was intrigued to know what was going on and I liked the idea of ...