Alainna

Thank you everyone for your crits. The poem was supposed to be based on Romeo and Juliet. (i wasn't to sure about the whole love thing myself at the time ...

Thank you gymnast, write me, Kay Kay and MisterWaffles!!!! I hate my name (no one says it right) but if you guys like it thats cool,lol. It's great to meet ...

This is a piece I wrote a year ago for my English class. Feel free to review. :D Catholic Maryling, An A grade student, Why would she do such a ...

I like your use of metaphors, it makes the piece very gripping and effective. To Improve- Maybe try re-arranging the piece to make it flow better as the part about ...

Welcome!!! I'm new too so it would probably not be such a fab idea to ask me any questions because i don't want to give you a wrong answer :oops: ...

Thanks Ditty, Claudette and Myth. Now that I've kinda introduced myself to some people i feel much more 'at home' and everyone seems really nice.(YAY!!) :P At the moment I'm ...

I liked it a lot and felt you used the right mixture of dialogue and discription (including some good similies). Was felix born a vampire? Sorry I'm not really familiar ...

Thanks guys!! I love the Mark Materials trilogy..........I'm re-reading the last one at the moment... I write a variety of things but I don't do poetry :shock: unless it is ...

Hi I'm new and just wanted to introduce myself..... :D My name's Alainna ( i wont tell you my surname because it's a nightmare hehe) I love Phillip Pullman books, ...

I really like the second picture because it gives an almost erie feel and it is very well captured. It reminds me of when it snowed round where I live...... ...

The irony used in this story works really well and as the story progresses you find yourself willing her not to take the pills. It's a great piece. I'll be ...