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Re: Gone
Wow. I loved this!!!! :D Great work, Alainna xxxxxxxx
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: Choices
I liked this poem, it kept my attention really well. Some of it was a bit...out of place, as though you were rhyming for the sake of it. For example: ...
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Re: Nobody Knew (REVISED)
Wow....that is one way of shocking someone out of becoming bulimic! It was really good but there needed to be more...tension and Ted didn't really call for help or anything... ...
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: Shadowstalker
Hi and welcome to YWS!!! Alainna xxxxxxx
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: Wow... it's been a long time!
Welcome back!! I know what you mean about not being able to see yourself in your own work, I've had the feeling before....it's terrifying. Alainna xxxxxxxxxxx
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: hi!
Hi!! Welcome to YWS!!! A cancer? cool...I'm a Sagittarius. If you need anything feel free to pm me... Alainna xxxxxxxxxxx
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: Lyla. Part 3
Lol...It's gonna be at least a week......soz. I'll try and get it done soon...... Thanks, Alainna xxxxx
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes (short bit)
I've read bits of this already........when you had it as canned beans. This is a good start and I really like this: Or, maybe€¦this will explain it better. When your ...
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: Talking Again
Hi McMourning!!! How are you?? Dear god you actually attempt to learn Greek!!!! (I hate my 'native' language). I am also learning Spanish, however it's hard to learn when your ...
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: {Place sarcastic introduction here}
Hi and welcome to YWS!!! Need anything feel free to pm me! :D Alainna xxxxxxxxxxx
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: Hey!!!
Hi!! Welcome to YWS!!!! If you need anything feel free to pm me!! Alainna xxxxxx
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: Pit
oooooooooh. I liked this!! :D What genre of music would this be? As for a title I reckon 'Demons' would kinda be cool... Alainna xxxxxxx
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: ~Tomorrow~
First of all I liked what this piece was about, it was very deep and meaningful. I wish I could write things like that in the morning!! However, it didn't ...
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Re: stuck in today
Yeah........this should probably be in Lyric Poetry........ Anyways.....this was very intriguing and meaningful. But with that my choice is not to forget I didn't really understand that line...... Goo
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: Yo-la!
Hola!!!!!!! Welcome to the one and only YWS!!!! Need anything just pm me....... Alainna xxxxxxxxx PS I to have a cat who I love very much.........his name is Gizmo and ...
Apr 7, 2007
