Alainna

I like the detail with the toenails, intriguing yet horrible at the same time! Couple of grammatical errors: I was as think as a twig anyway *Thin I was jealous ...

I reckon that Harry is the last Horcrux and has to die for Vold to die. Therefore, Ginny/Hermione/Ron has to kill Harry. I'm soo gonna cry reading the last book. ...

Questions do on the whole work well in poetry, I have used them before. However, questions work well in other pieces as well, not just poetry. I do use questions ...

I turned on the radio when I got up this morning and there was a news report on it. I nearly got back into bed just to scream into a ...

I'm being supportive of YWS!!! Vote monkey (even though I am soo used to saying vote Dragon....)!! Alainna xxxx

Hiya Amber (cool name..), Welcome to YWS!!! You'll love it here! If you have any questions or need a critique feel free to pm me!! :D Alainna xxxxxxxx P.S. Check ...

This is good, what genre of music would it be? It sounds kinda country. This didn't make sense: people can point and they and holler Great work, keep it up ...

This was a very good piece, I loved the fact that it had a twist and didn't go down the typical soppy way that some poems do. The only thing ...

I like the style this is written in, I think the voice is very good and it is quite smooth. There should be an 'a' before the word fool in ...

Granted but it means you have to have another YEAR at school.... I wish I could go back to laying in the park without a care in the world...

Lol, I like the fact that this boyfriend might be it something Sappy is prone to? I also like the jealousy...very realistic. Keep going Meeves!! Alainna xxxxxxx

I write whenever I'm inspired...but some of my best ideas happen when I'm relaxed (in the bath or dozing off) or very highly strung (after an argument or something upsetting). ...

YAY for His Dark Materials!! Happy reading HeadInTheClouds...it's a great book. Alainna xxxxxxxxx P.S. Once you're done you may want to check out the book review on His Dark Materials, ...

Hiya and welcome to YWS!!! You'll love it here!!!! Don't be afraid to pm me if you need a crit or help with anything...I'm always around!!! See ya Alainna xxxxxxx ...

Because everything is happening at once. Soon you'll be reminded how many people love you... What colour are my eyes?