Alainna

Another great part, so good that I can't really say much about it. I wish I had started reading this when you first started posting!!! Alainna xxxxxx

Great stuff!!! I'm absorbed well and truly now..... This line didn't make sense to me though: Consequences, however are best seen with your inner child however, because there's always somebody ...

Snoink Said: I'm reading "Catcher in the Rye." I'm just about to start reading it for the first time, I got it out the library today. I hope it's good, ...

Hi Ben and welcome to YWS!!!!!! If you've got any questions or need anything just check out the FAQ's or send me a pm and I'll be happy to help!!! ...

I love Scrubs too!!!! Catchy title music as well...... ANYWAYS, another great piece. There's not much I can say as the other two have pointed out the mistakes and other ...

This was definitely the best chapter so far. There was a lot of emotion and action in this piece that kept me utterly absorbed. I do it to prove that ...

This is still going strong and the writing is very powerful. I think you maybe could have combined Chapter 3 and Chapter 4 because they were both quite short. We ...

I have a little black book that I do my writing in then when I get time I type it up on Word. But I normally end up adding to ...

Hello theron guard and welcome to YWS!!!! Your into War Hammer? Wow, all my male friends play and talk about it non stop, so its not just them..... Anyways, if ...

Another good installment. I suppose we could go on forever, waiting for the end, or like so many others we could just hang up on our chance for a new ...

Right, this was a great start and definitely intriguing. I really loved some of your description, it worked very well. Last name, not important. This is slightly unnecessary, it interrupts ...

Hey JC!!!! Sounds like you've had some great traveling behind and in front of you! What's Alaska like? Red Hot Chili Peppers rule! What's your favourite song of theirs? I'm ...

Hiya and Welcome to YWS!!!! Yeah, this site does kinda stop you from getting other stuff done; especially when you get absorbed in some great writing! Well, if you have ...

My user name is my real name but I had complete mind block when joining and so just put my name.... However, I haven't given out my last name as ...

Sounds like it will be a hectic, fast paced thriller. With some great under lying secret..... Lyla