Alainna

TwinFlower wrote: Fortunately, I only have the Linnea part of the name--not the Borealis part, thank goodness. I already have to deal with one name people can't pronounce!! Join the ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! You're from Leicester, I've never been, although I don't live far away (London). So, if you ever feel like you need a crit or some ...

Hiya and welcome to YWS!!! 'Bananas and pomegranates', I've never been able to tackle those myself! :D If you need any help or want a crit feel free to pm ...

Hey Meeves!!!!! How ya doing??? I'm thinking of checking out 'Running With Scissors'....I know you highly recommend it! I loved Ice was so hooking. Don't worry about having writers block ...

Baroness Ink-- I think the whole rose water ice cream is Greek as I first had it in Cyprus, which is where my family is from. It's really scrummy though!! ...

Hey Hey!!! My favourite ice cream flavour......mmm.....has to be Mint Choc Chip. Or toffee. Or, have you ever tried Rose Water Ice Cream......yum!!!!!!!! All this talk of ice cream is ...

Ooh, Corrie seems rather creepy..... This was good, you're description is interesting and your characters are strong. However, this was really short and I think to crit properly I may ...

Oh dear, I can't believe I'm going to sit here and talk about myself. Well, here goes.... I'm Alainna. :D I'm fourteen (fifteen in just under seven months) and I'm ...

It's so funky!!! I really like it, great design and easy navigation, you guys should get a medal or something!! Good idea to have an 'about' on the toolbar as ...

Wow, I really like your name.....Linnaea Borealis, it's so funky!!!! Is it you're real name or nick name or do you abbreviate it or something??? Anyways, welcome to YWS!! I'm ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D YAY for Fall Out Boy! This ain't a scene...... ANYWAYS!!!!!!!!! You'll fit right in here, loads of spelling and grammar freaks (no offense.....

Fan-tast-IC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She was halfway to 'the spot' before she realized the flaw in her brilliant running away idea. Her notebook was still back there. Good use of sentence structure. Find ...

Very good, I like it when a chapter is on both accounts. Seeing him disgusts me, I no longer fear him as much as I hate him. You use the ...

What an evil horrible man. (was thinking of another word but I wont say it!) It was twelve midnight when she finally folded the bent and time worn notebook shut, ...

This was really good. I have one criticism however, sometimes a long piece like that (without any action etc) needs to be shortened to keep the reader interested. It wasn't ...