Alainna

Hola Jessica, cool user name. :wink: Welcome to YWS!!!!!! I have a tendency of carrying around my little black book which I do all my writing you're not alone on ...

Good, good stuff!!!! Anybody walking down the street would either mistake her for homeless. ???????????? The smell of grease and batter pounded on her as she stepped into the warm ...

Hey, This was great! Jamie sat down at her desk, moving the mouse the bring the computer back to life. Should be 'to' instead of 'the'. Personally, the language didn't ...

Great work, I'm really loving it!!! I liked your metaphor you used as well! I'm off to read more.... Alainna xxxxx

I try and critique at least once or twice a day. I have to in order to keep up with some story's which I love at the moment. If a ...

Heya Archae, welcome to YWS!!!! I'm a London gal myself but glad to hear you're not the typical Essex boy (although I doubt many of them are aspiring authors....). I ...

Hola Kayla, (great name by the way) and welcome to YWS!!! I've got that song in my head now because of you....lol. Anyways, if you need anything, like a crit ...

Hola and Welcome to YWS!!!! No need to be nervous, we don't bite.....well, not ALL of us bite anyways...... If you need anything, like help or a critique or just ...

I love the 'Alice' series, well until I kinda grew out of them.....but they are great books! How could Patrick leave Alice the way he did????? I like Jacqueline Wilson ...

Whoa, where has this side of Jamiy come from? HeHe. Good come back Meeves. I really liked this piece. Can't wait for more! Alainna xxxxx

Hey dudette!! Welcome to YWS!!! So, what do you write and what books are you into??? If you need help with anything or want a critique, pm me and I'll ...

I've just realized that this argument is pointless, as you really can not compare books. A book is something that different people react to in different ways, some will love ...

It was one of those books when you finish it, and have to just sit there staring at a wall, blinking for like and hour before you can move or ...

I didn't see the final of Musicool but I saw the odd one on a Saturday morning. I'd love to see the Lion King; it's my favourite Disney but I ...

He got what he deserved!!! :!: :!: A man lying on his back, soaked in red, a young girl, wide eyed and shaking splattered with it kneeling near him. Splattered ...