Alainna

Thanks Jenna, I'll try again when I come on tomorrow and see if it's back.... The mystery of the disappearing avatar!!!! Alainna xxxxxxx

For some reason my avatar won't show. It used to come up for the last like 3 months but all of a sudden it won't show. It's got nothing to ...

This was a good idea, however I think some (not all) of the rhyming ruined it. Sometimes I felt like you were 'rhyming for the sake of it'. Maybe just ...

My favourite book is The Butterfly Tattoo by Philip Pullman. It's one of his lesser known books but I just love it!!! I'm yet to meet someone who has read ...

First off, this was very good. The concept was spot on and you grasped the idea very well. However, as write me said I think that putting this poem into ...

I've finally caught up!! Yay!! This is going fantastically well. Your writing is sooo hooking; well done. To improve: It was the nurse from the last time she had been ...

Hi Afterthought and welcome to YWS!!!! If you feel lost or want a crit or a chat feel free to pm me andI'll be happy to help!!! See you around, ...

Hola and welcome to YWS!!! You'll soon get used to it around here, things are better after you've read the FAQ's :D . Feel free to pm me if you ...

Hola and welcome to YWS!!!! Hope you like it here. Pm me if you need anything (crit, help or a chat!!) and I'll get back to you as soon as ...

This was good but as pointed out before it's a tad unrealistic. I have a few tips though as I take part in the Mock Trial competition and even though ...

dom......dom......dom........ The suspense is horrible!!! I can't take it!!! I'm off to read more!!!!! Alainna xxxxxxxx

Hello Meevs!! This was really good, I liked the description of Nick; however some of the stuff Jaimiy has started saying seems a little out of place.... Has he developed ...

Awww!!! Poor Jaimiy. :( Great writing Meevs, Keep it up!! Alainna xxxxxxx

Fab chapter!!! Becca is sooo annoying!!!! Argh!! And what is going on with Rob?? Stand up for Jaimiy for goodness sake!!! I felt. Empty. Instead of a full stop I ...

Heya!! Ok, I want to say that I thought that piece was beautiful. It was filled with description that made it almost poetic. The voice continued to scream and threats ...