Alainna

This was so delicate and it really captures my imagination. I really like it!!! Alainna xxxxxx

WOW.........WOW...........WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D I love ice cubes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D I was waiting for that kiss to happen, literally on the edge of my seat!!! I like the way they ...

Things are looking up for Jamie!! This is a great piece, JC. Your writing has improved so much and you've really gained a knack for the whole court room stuff. ...

Hello Chris and welcome to YWS!! What type of music are you into? Feel free to pm me if you need a crit, help or a chat!! See you around, ...

Hiya and welcome to YWS!!!! Why don't you tell us a bit about yourself? What books do you like? what genre do you write? If you need anything feel free ...

Yay, 27!!!! Well, this was great as usual! I'm glad that there is some action in it. I cautiously made me way #my# When the time came I stood up ...

Hola and welcome to YWS!!!! I have a cat too....he's a lazy thing but I love him all the same. Well, if you need anything at all feel free to ...

Hola and welcome to YWS!!!! I hope you like it around here!!! If you ever need anything feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help!! See you ...

Hello the box and welcome to YWS!!! If you need anything, like a crit, help or a chat, pm me and I'll be happy to help!! Good luck with your ...

OK, so I need to find some good Teenage fiction novels (YA) for some research I'm doing into fiction writing. Can anyone recommend a book based on Teenage Pregnancy?? I ...

Hola Katy and welcome to YWS!!! If you ever need anything, like a crit, help or a chat, feel free to pm me and I'll get back to you as ...

This is a much better court room scene, very realistic!!! I hope I'm doing this in the right order...argh! Alainna xxxxxxxx

"I had sex with Alan" I'm glad that you put this in like that. Sometimes subjects need to be dropped in at random because it seems more real, more believable. ...

Yay, more ice cubes!!! You're on a roll now!!! Good choice of lesson; everyone does weird stuff in History! And a very creative idea, too. Alainna xxxxxxxx

Hi JC! Well done with all the research, your re-write is looking really good! I'm going to try and read all of this in the correct order and stuff but ...