Alainna

It's OK!! I managed to get a hold of a few books which I have now read, but having said that the genre would have been 'Social Issues' in Fiction. ...

OK, I bet no-one has even heard of this book. It's one of those that screams 'GIRLY' just from the synopsis. What's It About?? It follows the life of a ...

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Oooh!! More cliffhanger endings!!! Argh! OK, this was good, but a bit too short.... The last paragraph was very good, it held the piece together. Keep it up, Alainna xxxxxxxx

*Hides tissue and wipes eyes quickly*. I feel like you can only ever write something that true and emotive if you yourself have been through something traumatic. Maybe I'm wrong?? ...

This is great JC, are you thinking of publishing? The last line was FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Erm, nothing but praise from me today! :D So I'm off to read the next part! ...

This was another good piece. I love your cliffhanger endings! This confused me: I was starting to feel nauseous being in this House and Garden after home. Were you trying ...

Nooooooo, Steve!!! I like Chris!! Well, despite the whole rape thing in the past and all that...*sigh*. Jamiy is becoming very....sarcastic and has developed a slight attitude lately..I think it ...

Thank you for all the replies!!! I do realize that it needs to be set out with more spacing, it looks like a huge block at the moment!! I'll try ...

Oooooh!! Why she say sure?? Silly girl!! Good ending JC! I liked it although it was evil! Alainna xxxxxx

I was momentarily confused with who you were talking about because I didn't realize that Rick was a nickname for Patrick!!! Duh!!! Ok, I liked this part but I think ...

OK, this was good, but not really much to it.... I think you could really have joined chapters 2 & 3 together seems as they are both not from Corrie's ...

Hi Gen!! I found this part much better than the first as it had more dialouge in it. I like Kaia but I want there to be something more about ...

HeHe, JC!!! It's an English thing 'Cor'. Kinda like an exclamation. :D Ok, Meevs, I liked this and I liked the way it led onto Rob. It made the whole ...

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