Alainna

Hola Jane and welcome to YWS!!!!! *Runs around with a 'welcome' banner!!!* If you need anything at all feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help!! All ...

YAY!!! A longer piece. This was good and I'm glad it was from Corrie's POV. And Papa would have no clue about it at all. Whose Papa? :? Did I ...

I'm glad that Amber is back. Jamie needs some support. I really liked that installment; it was....different. And in a good way!!! :D I got a little confused with the ...

Another fantastic chapter JC! *Hugs POD* Finally she turned and walked back out the door, leaving her mother behind. "Jamie-" Mary called out. Jamie was already out the door and ...

Thanks everyone!! I've already read Baby Blue, The Opposite Of Chocolate and Birthday I now have a better insight on how to write about teen pregnancy. Thanks for all the ...

Thank you for everyone's replies and comments. I never write poems, in fact I avoid them, however I was feeling very emotional at the time when I wrote this. Thank ...

I really liked them all, they all look so professional!! I loved the road sign, it mesmerized me! All the roses were very eye catching and so was the photo ...

I liked this a lot, it's cute and accurate. The shading could be a bit more gradual though, but other than that it's really good. Alainna xxxxxxxxx

This was indeed extremely short! I did like it though. I like the detail about Lavender. Please try and post more in one go, as it's hard to crit like ...

Another fantastic piece Meevs! I knew from Sappy that sure did put girl's in terrible moods. For some reason that just doesn't sound right. It goes kinda wobbly at 'that'. ...

OK, thank you for the replies to the first part. This is the end. Enjoy. Somewhere Else Continued. 20th July 1974 I was out in the square, about to get ...

You're probably better off reading my 'About The Authors'. it's somewhere here.....*Dusts off a piece of paper at the bottom of the pile*. Only kidding! I am a London girl. ...

That was soo descriptive and....beautiful. I really liked it. I can't really crit it properly because I can't find anything wrong with it!!! Thumbs up from me, Alainna xxxxxx

Ok, this was good, slightly typical and very YA but there were some really good parts. One thing you should know about summer school was that they had the same ...

Hey Heather!! I used to go horse riding too- but I only ever went in the summer and now I don't really have the time... I loved it though! So, ...