Alainna

Argh....the suspense is killing me!!! Short but good, I'm fully submerged in your style of writing! Keep it up and PM me when you post more as the portfolios are ...

Hey JC, this was some emotional stuff!!! I have nothing in the form of crit for this piece, just praise. :D Short and to the point, I can't wait for ...

I can't really crit so I'll just say what I like.... I loved the 1st one with the flower and the third with the dead tree. The last one didn't ...

I think she should go to the deserted house, have a scene there with memories etc THEN go to Kitty's house.... Alainna xxxxx

OK, this is still going strong and your writing has improved from the beginning however this chapter wasn't as strong as the previous two. I won't bother echoing what Sworddance ...

PHILIP PULLMAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!! I love his writing. My favourite book is the butterfly tattoo by him. Awesome. So, hello Tempest and welcome to YWS!!! If you need anything at all, ...

I'm really enjoying reading this! There weren't that many visible mistakes that have not been pointed out already, so well done. My real crit is exactly what Sam and JC ...

8/10. My favourite Disney film and character....

Hey JC, this was very good!!! The begging was great and raw but it kind of dithered around the point when Jake left and then fizzled out. Could there have ...

This piece was very emotive and it was that that kept my attention the whole way through. The sound of an angel's voice calls me over as I step off ...

I'm really getting into your writing and I like your story line. Most of the crit has been done for me already but... "So...meet any...boys?" Edna asked, eyes wide. You ...

This was really good and now I'm hooked!!! I can't really crit much as I didn't find any mistakes and others have already pointed most praise from me!!! Just be ...

Hello and welcome to YWS!!! I'll take a look at your stuff sometime... If you need anything feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help! Alainna xxxxx

Hello and welcome to YWS!!! What's your favourite book?? If you need anything at all feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help!! Alainna xxxx

Hello Kristin and welcome to YWS!!! If you need anything at all feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help!! See ya Alainna xxxxxx