Alainna

Thanks guys for the comments. I'm in complete agreement that the argument was rubbish and this chapter not to strong. I really need to work on it! Jules- I'm here, ...

I wouldn't say this was iffy, just that Jamie need to react a bit more. *Darn, I really wanted her to slap her mother.....Hehe* A bit all I can suggest. ...

Muse- Thank you!!! HUGS!!!!!! Jack- At least you can recognise the pain of not waking up with perfect hair. my friends think I'm mad with my love for my straightners... ...

OK, so I actually read all of it and kinda saw the ending happen, but it was still sad. I must of cried at least six times through this book ...

Jack- Do you use straightners? Hehe... Quick question...God, I sound thick, but how do you post your pics here? 'Cos I've been trying for days and I can't figure it ...

The first paragraph is a let down.....but otherwise this was good. I don't think it's as strong as previous chapters and I feel like we could have had more thoughts ...

Heya, Welcome to YWS!!! Don't worry, you'll get the hang of things soon. If you need anything at all feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS!! If you need anything feel free to pm me and i'll be happy to help you out! See ya around, Alainna xxxxxx

Erm....I know more about London racism than oldham but the bbc is a great place to do research. I found this link. There are many others if you just type ...

Heya Splendi and welcome to YWS!!! If you need any help or crit or just a chat feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help!!! So, what ...

Nate you are sooooooo cool!!!! I actually nearly cried when YWS went down.....I was having a bad day as it was and my 'pick-me-up' wasn't there to help....Then I got ...

More POD!!!! YAY!!! This was good, as usual!!!! I loved the last line, great dramatic ending. It feels a little....dry, these chapters at the party, but hopefully once you move ...

I really got into this piece; always a good sign!!! The coolness of the rain felt good on my bare shoulders as I ran through the large park. My hair ...

Misspriss-- lovin' the blue hair!! It's so funky!!! Whence-- cool pose

But, at the same time, I very much doubt that he will survive the next general election. 'Tis David Cameron for the future, methinks. Hopefully a change for the better. ...