Alainna

I've read Murder On The Orient Express and the Hollow, which are both brilliant. I don't like Miss Marple though, I prefer Poirot. The Hollow is great, I would recommend ...

Argh, I finished yesterday. [spoiler]From the moment Fred died onwards I cried. it is the only HP book to reduce me to the state of crying where you are actually ...

Hey Eric, I've seen you around a bit actually...So, Welcome to YWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you need anything at all feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you ...

Hey there Norm!! Welcome to YWS! If you need anything feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you out! I hope to see your work up ...

Hey Chanel and welcome to YWS!!! If you need anything at all (crit, help or a chat) feel free to pm me and I'll give you a speedy reply as ...

Hey and I suppose welcome back to YWS!! Hope you find it useful around here, it's actually really helpful to share your work. See you, Alainna xx

This was good, although there wasn't much to it. I think Clau pointed out the mistakes so there's no point me going over them. I really am getting....frustrated with Jamie. ...

Thank you for all the comments. Twit- It was from Claire and I'm glad you picked up on that!!! DQ- It was only called letter to you because a lot ...

There seems to be lots of Naturo/Anime/Manga fans on here. Aren't they, quote, violent Japanese cartoons, unquote? LOL! Be careful Twit, she may attack you..... Hey PN! How ya doin? ...

This was really good and as I've read the edited version I have no problems with the piece. Sometimes your description got a little bit...long, but you always snapped back ...

:shock: Oh My!!!! Good shock, very gripping. I liked this very much and as my crits go on I'm struggling to find much to say! (Which is a fantastic thing!!!) ...

I feel sorry for those families. Nothing as serious as that happened to me, however, I did have a semi-stalker last summer. He got my mobile number, knew my name ...

Thanks for pointing that out ShadowTwit! You're not being nosy, no worries!! Yes, I do have a scar from being burnt last October. It's on my upper arm on my ...

Rated for mild violence. This is my competition entry, however feel free to crit. I think it's a little confusing, so some feedback on that would be great. Enjoy. _____________________________________

I was just about to say....Richard does look too good for his personality. Mary suits the image I had in my head and so does Natalie. But hang on, where's ...