Alainna

Hola and welcome to YWS! Hmmm....whitelighter....Charmed fan? Well, if you need anything at all feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you out! :D Hope you ...

Heya happy and welcome to YWS!! Hope you like it here! Alainna xxx

Hello and welcome to YWS!! If you need anything at all feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you out! Hope you like it around here! ...

I could find no faults whatsoever with this piece other than it was a bit....long? No, too descriptive in places. Also, could you try to break the writing up a ...

This was really good, I was hooked from the moment I read the first line. What if her parents wake up and see us? A simple slip-up. You jump to ...

Hey SOPF!! First off, this was good and I think it was compelling (enough for a prologue anyway..). Just a tip: Try to space out your writing so that it ...

Hey there Sopf and welcome to YWS!! If you need anything feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you out! Hope you like it around here ...

Hey Bee! Welcome to YWS!! I also have a problem with finishing my stories, but I'm doing better since I've joined YWS! If you need any help, or a crit ...

Thank you for the comments and help! I think for this piece of writing (the story as a whole) it is my sentence structure that lets me down a little ...

I like the coffee one, it makes me feel all warm inside, but the pink smile makes me feel like grinning :D I'm the same! The coffee one is my ...

Welcome back Meep! Even if it is only for a while.. :D Alainna xxxxx

Hey Twit! I can only say good about this chapter; I found no mistakes. Just be sure not to over-use some of the can become tiresome. A very absorbing and ...

Oh my! It is completely different! Well, I'm glad you addressed the issue with her running away. and I like the fact that you're showing how screwed up she is ...

Hey and welcome to YWS! If you need anything feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help. Cool avatar by the way. Alainna xxxx

Hey DreamDay and welcome to YWS!!! Aw, Queen, The Beatles, The White Stripes. Cool. :wink: Well, if you need anything at all feel free to pm me and I'll be ...