Alainna

Hey there and welcome officially to YWS!! Well, if you do need a crit or anything feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help. I look forward ...

Hola Cruc (can I call you that?) and welcome to YWS!! Feud????? I'm soo delayed. Oh, well, no hard feelings, us YWS-ers are hard critiquers and I thought that when ...

Hello Abbey (I love your name by the way..) and welcome to YWS! *Hands you complimentary welcome cookie* If you need anything at all feel free to pm me and ...

Hola Shotgun and welcome to YWS!! If you do need anything then feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you out. So, why don't you tell ...

Hello cwarrior and welcome to YWS!! I hope you are liking the site. Alainna xxx

Hello Jared and welcome to YWS!! If you need anything feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you as best as I can! Aww, that is ...

Welcome to Jared and Alysa!! Hope you like it here and pm me if you need anything! Alainna xxx

I'm just finishing off Nineteen Eighty-Four (which I'm finding OK, but not great- I probably don't get it as much as if I were to read it in a few ...

Hello Nathan and welcome to YWS!! Ah, 1 in the morning is a great time for signing up to random sites on the web. :D If you need anything at ...

Hello Ash and welcome to YWS!! If you need anything at all feel free to pm me and I'll be happy to help you out! I hope you like it ...

Hola Emma and welcome to YWS!! *Pokes at welcome banner with wand so that the name Emma appears.* Well, first off thank you for the crit on my work!!! It's ...

Hey Emily and a belated welcome to you!! Well, I'm sure you've got the hang of things round here but if you need a crit or just want a chat ...

Hello and welcome to YWS. I think the others have covered your questions but don't worry about points. The more active a member you are, generally the more points you ...

Unlike the others, I really liked how short the "caress her" line was. I thought it showed symbolism, like you were tired of explaining this and just needed to stop ...

I really enjoyed reading this and I like your character. I can't say much as a lot was pointed out above. What fools In italics maybe? Today would be a ...