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Re: I Love You Preface
Hey you :) I really hope you wouldn't take anything to heart. Just here to give a tiny bit of help :P I got to say that I LOVE your ...
Jan 2, 2012 -
Re: Smoke and Fire: Two
Hey :P I love your writing! It's so detailed and descriptive and each sentence smoothly runs into the next. You have a really cool plot coming on and I really ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1)
Hey Well I don't have any negative comments about this :O This is just pure amazing! The opening drew me in instantly! I LOVE the way you describe the whole ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: A brief history of boys I fancied as a teenager
hahaha this is actually one of the most awesome things I have ever read! It's obviously you describing your past crushes and it really gets your readers thinking about their ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Twelve
Well I don't know if my review would be any use- this is the first chapter that I've read out of your story and I can say that I love ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Evil Angel Chapters 1 & 2
Hey :D Well I LOVE the first chapter :O it's amazing! It totally grabbed my attention from the first paragraph! :O The character of Raiden seems like an awesome big ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: When I Fell Pregnant [May]
Well I got a few things to say :D You are a really good writer :D I love this story. And the way you developed your main character and David!! ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Night and Day at once
:O I LOVEE the message in this poem :) It's so true, all of us are still human no matter where we are, (if that's the message in this poem ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Patience chapter 2
Heyy ;) I'm here to review your work :D Well so far- the story is great :D It gets kind of confusing in the end but I'm sure that with ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chap. 5
Heyy :) Sorry it took me so long to answer back to your request. But here I am now ;) Hmm- this chapter is great- there's a load of vivid ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Try To Escape Chapter 4
Ooh a deadly fantasy romance novel :D :D This is reallyy good :D "Did you hear that, you over confident scum bag? She. Doesn't . Like. You." That was the ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: The Glade
I really like this :D You wrote it so well :O like you captured exactly how Kim and Josh were feeling :D and I liked that- the way you showed ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Please, please just give your opinion - even if brief.
I love the start of this poem- it's so attention grabbing and really sets the mood to the poem. "Discreditable of existence, unworthy of more than a sentence" I love ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Tainted-Chapter 2
I know this is for 18s but screw it. I like the title :) it reallyy catches your attention. It's probably the first thing i noticed before I clicked on ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Draw Near To Me
Hey :) welcome to YWS xD I really like the preface :O it was short and straight to the point. Main character who's in love with Jason. That ' s ...
Dec 24, 2010