Aisho

Actually, it's despair ... I was being facetious. ;) You said to spell something wrong, after all. Hence the underline.

Just to clear things up ... Ianna is a spitfire, and she's learned to control herself because of who she has to be. Aedaan is the only family she's got ...

Oolala. An *excellent* continuation. I can't wait for chapter two. This discrimination against Torians is really interesting. I've gone for culture-against-culture before myself, but I have to say I d

My only thought was "patience, my young padawan." :D I liked it a lot. .... there's not really much to say. Which is pretty awesome, especially from a knife-them-in-the-gut critiquer ...