AirWalker

Hi again :D This may sound really weird but this was based on a dream I had.. it wasn't particularly based in a fairground but it was definately based on ...

Hi! Yeah, re-reading it, I can see how it gets confusing. The first few paragraphs pretty much describe "the feeling" that the narrator gets from escape. I included the sections ...

This is my first short story post so I'm a little nervous (but don't let that stop you from slating it.) This is only the beginning of a story because ...

This is my first post so I'm a bit nervous, but please tell me if it's crap (or good :) ). I sometimes get irritated with this rhyme scheme but ...

Firstly, i thought the piece was extremely cute. Aside from all that everyone else said about the word predatorily (which I think should be a word and worked quite well), ...