Aina

My advice: Start writing and see what people say then. Wait until we know a litte more than the first few pages. If the setting seems HP that will be ...

My first story was about a rabbit at chrismas or so I am told. I wrote it in elementry school some time and my mom sent it to Grandma so ...

You said vampires don't exist in your world so in my opinion it is perfectly fine to give vampire roumors a source other than vampires. I love vampires in almost ...

My main caracters often start out as Mary Sues, but then I start to think about them and think about what thier past is like (you know: where they have ...

Cool. And I thought all people here are from English speaking countries. Guess what! I live in Germany and have been speaking german ever since i was a baby. applies ...

Okay. I've got a story here that is set in a futuristic world but has people with powers like teleportation, reading minds, or anything along those lines you can come ...

Thanks for the PM. Feel free to keep sending them. Here are the thing I noticed: I had to go back to part 3 to check and then I saw ...

Edit: Erased. I double posted by mistake.

Thank you for the PM. There is not really much I can criticize here. You did a very good job. I agree with bludragon that the ages are kind of ...

I am preparing to write a novel so I took that. The first thing I am going to put online! I am so exited!

“Wow, dad. I hate it. Thanks a fuckin bunch.” Now my horrific day tomorrow would be just that much more dreadful. Hey, at least I wouldn’t be faced with the ...

I did not think that this was very funny. 2 reasons: 1) Too much cussing. A overload of cussing is not funny. It is only not very creative. Unless you ...

Thank you for the PM. Here we go: Each time one of those deadly legs cut my body, I would be reminded of the reason I’d been shot – the ...

Okay. Here we go. First: I have got absolutely no idea about what this place is, what the Poet is like and what is going on after having read the ...

Wow. I really like the way it is obvious that she is dreaming although you do not say it until the very end. Everything is so obviously nightmare scenario. It ...