AgentChameleon

Wow..... That was an EPIC beginning for a story!!!! I sincerely enjoyed the way you portrayed the character. As it was in a good and well constructed story, you made ...

This story was very intriguing. It made me feel like i was actually with them in their adventures. The grammar and punctuation were fantastic as well as your story line. ...

Well Done, this is a well constructed story that really seems like a ' portrait of a healing heart.' You could work on you grammatical terms like commas and full ...

The Witches Gem *Note* This is under copyright to the Founder of SOMM SOCIETY. Also this story is quite childish. The Intro: : : My name is Czarina ( Zah-ree-nah) ...

Your Short Story was very image full and exuberant to read. What i don't prefer is the exaggeration of this story as the original version might be quite better. Punctuation: ...

Really Well Done!!! Your grammar and punctuation were perfect in my opinion and your storyline was fantastic! Generally, I really enjoyed your story and the characters inside it. The story ...

Wow.... That was AMAZING! Even i couldn't write a short story like that. What i would say to improve it is just use less of the vulgar language and expressions. ...

That's an Epic Poem to write when your bored! Grammar, spelling and punctuation are all good and I do like the carefree and Simplicitness of that poem! P.s I think ...

Hello Everyone! As I said earlier, Questions and Facts about YWS can be answered and told here. By not just me, It is by everyone who knows anything or wants ...

Well done! That is a great beginning to a wonderful story! keep going and that story is going to be just fabulous. Your Punctuation is good and you creativeness is ...

Wow ..... That is really good!! Keep going ! i'm looking forward to the rest of your work!

The Ghost I Hear Thus one fine evening, As I lay snuggled in bed, A loud noise came toward me, And I shivered in my dread. For was it a ...