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Re: Samodiva
Well, here we have quite a typical piece of exposition. As the beginning of the story, your aim here is of course to establish interest in the story by finding ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: Inside Your Head Is Spring
Inside your head is spring infinite seeds roots shoots flowers bushes trees up- upward to your sun spring But outside your head is not spring only snow and ice lice ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Hide from the Artificial Sun
These butterfly wings have razor edges, cutting through my stomach walls as if they were hedges. Trimming this garden of mine oh-so-neat, for must I not look glorious in defeat? ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: The Reign Of Love
Well, that was quite a long "short story"! You've clearly put work into it. As such, I'm sure you'll want it to be as good as it can and I ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Favorite Bands? Or songs?
I'm very glad someone here mentioned Joy Division (Kudos to 567ajt for that)! here then are the ones that first came to mind on this occasion: Joy Division Arcade Fire ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Ode to A(utomatic) Door
Thank you for the reviews! To clear up the question both have had so far, the first line can be understood in at least two waves (heh, aren't I the ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Killer Night
Hello. Now, while I suppose the "right" thing to do would be to scold you for being distracted enough from your history lesson to be able to write a story, ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Iron Bars
I have somewhat conflicting emotions regarding this poem. On one hand the imagery you've used seems to be clichéd ("You took my day and left me the night"; "Only my ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Ode to A(utomatic) Door
Press your ear firmly against these waves, and hear a miracle you fail to see on busy days. This magnificent creation of man, requires for opening neither hand! 'Tis automatic ...
Nov 7, 2011
