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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Samodiva

    Well, here we have quite a typical piece of exposition. As the beginning of the story, your aim here is of course to establish interest in the story by finding ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Inside Your Head Is Spring

    Inside your head is spring infinite seeds roots shoots flowers bushes trees up- upward to your sun spring But outside your head is not spring only snow and ice lice ...

    Dec 3, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hide from the Artificial Sun

    These butterfly wings have razor edges, cutting through my stomach walls as if they were hedges. Trimming this garden of mine oh-so-neat, for must I not look glorious in defeat? ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Reign Of Love

    Well, that was quite a long "short story"! You've clearly put work into it. As such, I'm sure you'll want it to be as good as it can and I ...

    Nov 11, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Favorite Bands? Or songs?

    I'm very glad someone here mentioned Joy Division (Kudos to 567ajt for that)! here then are the ones that first came to mind on this occasion: Joy Division Arcade Fire ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Ode to A(utomatic) Door

    Thank you for the reviews! To clear up the question both have had so far, the first line can be understood in at least two waves (heh, aren't I the ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Killer Night

    Hello. Now, while I suppose the "right" thing to do would be to scold you for being distracted enough from your history lesson to be able to write a story, ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Iron Bars

    I have somewhat conflicting emotions regarding this poem. On one hand the imagery you've used seems to be clichéd ("You took my day and left me the night"; "Only my ...

    Nov 7, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Ode to A(utomatic) Door

    Press your ear firmly against these waves, and hear a miracle you fail to see on busy days. This magnificent creation of man, requires for opening neither hand! 'Tis automatic ...

    Nov 7, 2011


By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food until you return to the ground, since from it you were taken; for dust you are and to dust you will return.
— Genesis 3:19